All Comments on 'Christmas Joy'

Wills, that was extremely hot and brilliantly written. I love the language you use in your writing, it's very visceral and real. The scenario was great and very well set up. It's the kind of thing I enjoy. It aroused me in a way not many do. ;-)

Thanks for a great read, Wills.

I thought your dialogue was very smooth and realistic and it helped to bring all your characters to life. The story was funny, hot and a pleasure to read.