All Comments on 'Christmas Trip with the Cousins'

The actual "continuity" of the story was a different story. Drifting from past tense to present tense, keeping track of the characters within the story, spelling and grammar errors... Those were a bit much to deal with. You can have absurd, and you can have sloppy writing, but you can't have both at once.

This is one of the most leaden stories I have ever read.