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Click hereWe all laughed at her antics, until a smirking Dave held up his placard...
'8.5'
Summer went ballistic!
"Eight-point-five?! Are you blind? No way that was only an eight-point-five! I nailed the dismount, and totally stuck the landing! You're a crooked judge! I demand an investigation!"
John quipped, "It's always the fucking Russian judge."
Playing up the drama queen act, Summer let out an exasperated sigh before theatrically flinging herself back into my arms. With her beautiful breasts bouncing merrily in the sunshine, she giggled, "Screwed again by the fucking Russian judge!"
"Yep, you sure got screwed," Aaron grinned.
Playfully grinding her ass in my lap, Summer purred sexily, "Mmmm-hmmmmm, I sure did...."
~to be continued~
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 14 years agoI love that you didn't give us a play-by-play with Summer and Aaron. I also love that Summer had a moment with Jake, even if they were unfairly judged. Hee.
Dave is a wild man.
Anonymousover 15 years agoI'm sure there is a letdown with diminishing returns on a series but you still have unfinished storylines with the whole gift thing going on. Even if you start something new, I'll be a loyal reader. I love your writing style even if I don't always find character's actions my cup of tea. Keep up the great work.
Tim
stevieraygovanover 15 years agoAuthorDidn't like the peeing, huh? ~chuckle~ Well, as you probably already figured out the peeing scene was the request scene from Jen.<p>
You're not alone regarding that scene, by the way. My wife looked at me a bit oddly too when she read that scene.<p>
"So, now I see what you've been getting into with these people who've been e-mailing you about your stories!" she said. She was kinda laughing about it...but kinda worried too!<p>
I was highly amused. She only half bought the idea that it was just a request scene. She didn't completely believe me until I showed her Jen's e-mails and even then she started in with questions about why are "pee women" writing me and was she going to have to start worrying about getting peed on all of a sudden?<p>
THAT made me bust up.<p>
Anyway, I had a pretty good feeling that scene wouldn't be everyone's cup o' tea but as turned out at least I made Jen happy with it. She wrote to say she loved it to death and really that was the only goal there, to just make her happy.<p>
Kinda dicey though, including request scenes into my own stories. Not so sure I'll do it again. Hell, I'm not sure I'll even do any more request stories at all since none of my request stories have been nearly as well received as my "all original" stories. Even this latest chapter of "Christmas With Summer" has received lower scores than the other three chapters in the series (a 4.25 total score so far, vs the 4.80 average of the other three chapters) and I'm wondering how much of that slightly negative response is due to Jen's request scene?<p>
I'll also admit to you that I may not go any further with this series. This latest chapter received only a fraction of the views of the other chapters and the fewest vote totals by far of any story I've submitted. It's the whole diminishing returns thing. Other than for the "diehards" who really look forward to seeing each new chapter the raw numbers clearly indicate that the longer a series goes on here the less likely people are to read each new chapter; that seems to be the message I'm getting. I saw the same phenomenon with my four part "Angelina" series. Chapter 1 had nearly 25,000 views and 100 votes but by the time Chapter IV rolled around just a few days later (and Chapter IV was much hotter than Chapter I) it only received 6000 views and half the votes. This "Christmas With Summer" series is following the same trend with this latest chapter only receiving a little over 2000 views and hardly any votes, compared to double the votes and 13,000 views for the first chapter. In fact, at the rate the viewership of this series is dwindling pretty soon it'll just be you and three or four other people who are still reading any new chapters! LOL!!<p>
Hmmm. Dunno. It's tempting to just let this one stay "unfinished," with each person's imagination providing their own ending...kinda like that weak ass ending of "The Sopranos"!!
Anonymousover 15 years agoMarcus here, you'd better keep writing!
The peeing was a bit much for me (not something me and my wife are into at all) but the rest of it was great. I like how you describe the differences between the different men.
Not much else to say i guess, but i want to know what happens with the three gifts!
