All Comments on 'Chronicles of the Unpretty'

This is a great story already. I can so identify with the character, unfortunately, but that's alright, like she said, f*** 'em. But I can't wait for updates, so keep em coming!

Excellent.

I really liked it! I can totally relate to the looking plain part. Hope you continue.

I laughed while I read this because it sounds just like when you're writing in your diary/journal lol. I like Ryan and I wish her good luck. **lilmami07**

So, it's almost my bed time, and yes, at 30-something, I have a bed time. I was so eager to call it a day and drift off to sleep, but I wanted to do a little reading before I called it a night. So glad I did. Great start and it kept me reading despite the drooping eyelids!

this piece really stood out for me. I love stories whose characters are embarrassingly honest in their truth. Great title btw... totally drew me in. Thank you ~Ladyrose~

Painfully honest, yet sweet and LOL funny! I could relate on so many levels. I hope you continue Ryan's adventures (or misadventures...). Nicely done. Looking forward to your next story...this one...or a new one.

I think your story is very funny and true but it is a bit out of place being featured on this site.

I am a black out of shape woman as well, going through the same thing starting a workout regiment and i couldn't even do 15 min. I work a really hard job, but my body got used to it so when i tried to work out to push it further, i couldn't even get off the bike.....

I feel self conscious around all the barbies too, but I say to myself every time i hit the gym. This is for me... this is for me...

Thanks for keeping it real and now.... to give bob some time (battery operated boyfriend) lol

I laughed so hard I almost, woke up my whole house lol.

what a great story, no varnish what so ever :)

I hope you will continue this story I really enjoyed this chapter.

Ohhh I know that so much time has passed so I know there won't be a part 2. But on the off chance that you came back to this one comment I pray you continue. Ryan's point of view is just so wonderful it's just as you planned like reading someone's diary hoping not to get caught. Please even though time has passed I hope you come back to this story.

I also like the way the story is going. Please finish it.

I like Ryan, I do hope that she improve her feelings of self-worth.

you had me laughing for a full 5 minutes. that is a hard feat for that alone you get 5 stars. the story also happens to be so true to life that you have to love it. keep up the good work.

I have to say this has just become my favorite story ever... Story of my life except I probably would have given up on the gym.

Although I'm not Jewish, not an editor, never met the nice guy (unless you mean the toothless or front tooth missing boogerbear type) who strikes up a DECENT conversation (not conversation starter--got any kids or you single ain't you?) without a vibrator, living in the 'hood, I really can relate. The only difference is I have a seductive name without the attitude to cover it.

Yes, I come to Literotica alot to fulfill that relationship need. Yes, I know this is sad...lol.