by JonB1969
Nice story. Its about time someone is writing stories with attractive black women getting their "freak" on. Keep up the good work. Oh and just a special request on future stories: Can you make some of the cheating a little more risque. For example: she is on the phone with hubby while her lover is sexing her or maybe he is in the next room while she is getting sexed. Just food for thought to make the sex scenes more exciting with a bit of adrenaline rush.
I'm really enjoyed this. Very romantic and erotic. I hope there's a follow-up for Yvette and Billy....
Wanted to say thanks for a most enjoyable read. I scanned your bio as well and understand and appreciate your fascination with and captivation by black women. Since college, for me the late sixties thru the mid seventies, I have loved and been loved by some incredible women of color. Perhaps its just good fortune, or that I've made some great choices, but they've all been more intensely in touch with their own sensuality and sexuality than almost any of the other women I've had the joy of experiencing. I look forward to reading a lot more of your work. Thanks.
YOU SHOULD FOLLOW-UP ON HOW YVETTE & BILLY CONTINUE AND DOES ANTOINE TRY TO STICK HIS "NOSE" IN THEIR BUISNESS?
I'm a black woman who's never been with a white guy but every once in a while I see one who turns me on to distraction. This story was so erotic it made me cum and left me shivering for a white tongue to be licking all over my body and belly button and making me scream and cream from the pleasure. Very well done, you've hit onto one of my fantasies.
I am 53yrs. old white and deeply in love with a beautiful black lady. She is the first that I have ever dated, and I am her first white man. We both have a second chance at happiness. We can't keep our hands off each other. We read the story together, and I licked and sucked her to two orgasms before making love.
its a good story but whats up with all the "baby" . its like somebody's mom but i like where it's going.
i didn't like how she called him "baby" so soon and every so often, and infront of coworkers? not professional, who does that? and everything happened too fast, omg i wish he was my boyfriend, next day her boyfriend lets see other okay now they going out the fuck? in the net chapter they gonna be married with kids.
Not forced, not stilted and felt quite natural! I would have preferred more buildup to them having sex, but there was enough backstory to establish how Yvette felt. VERY hot and I'm glad I found this! :)