by sad8ed_butterfly
poorly motivated plot + actors.
trite execution.
unimaginative fucking.
absurdly smooth devirginized shithole by an 8" pecker.
result: low excitation.
Oh wow! I really appreciate all of the positive feedback. I know there were some flaws with the story especially grammatically (oops!) but I really appreciate everyone not saying it. Because yes. I know. I need to proofread.
As far as a follow up story of Claire and Cam's kinky sexcapades, it has been posted! And should be up within the next few days.
OH MY GOD BRAVO!! Ok I give it to you! The most AMAZING story I have EVER read on literotica as of yet. just HOT!
Very very good first one. I would like to read more about Claire and Cam, maybe you could give us a nasty romance story like some famous Literotica authors did.
Thanks for writing
Well writen and very hot. Don't stop there. Keep going and make her do more for Cam - satisfy his every twisted fetish before she graduates!
I totally agree with the last comment......Keep Claire and Cam cumming...can't wait until he fucks her virgin pussy. xoxoxxo
Wao, I don't know if this is ur first time, but this is a very well writing story, keep em coming, or better yet keep us cumming! wink wink