All Comments on 'Claire and the New Guy'

by sad8ed_butterfly

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Very Hot!!!

Wao, I don't know if this is ur first time, but this is a very well writing story, keep em coming, or better yet keep us cumming! wink wink

lola105lola105about 13 years ago
Oh Yeah

I totally agree with the last comment......Keep Claire and Cam cumming...can't wait until he fucks her virgin pussy. xoxoxxo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Don't stop there!

Well writen and very hot. Don't stop there. Keep going and make her do more for Cam - satisfy his every twisted fetish before she graduates!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Hot

Please continue the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
MORE...

Keep them CUMMING !!!

FrankjrBauerFrankjrBauerabout 13 years ago
Amazing, a virgin whore

Very very good first one. I would like to read more about Claire and Cam, maybe you could give us a nasty romance story like some famous Literotica authors did.

Thanks for writing

erikeveserikevesabout 13 years ago
Great story!!

Get busy and write some more!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
HOLY....SHIT!

OH MY GOD BRAVO!! Ok I give it to you! The most AMAZING story I have EVER read on literotica as of yet. just HOT!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

OH GOD THAT WAS WONDERFUL!! You HAVE to make more! Please?

sad8ed_butterflysad8ed_butterflyabout 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks guys!

Oh wow! I really appreciate all of the positive feedback. I know there were some flaws with the story especially grammatically (oops!) but I really appreciate everyone not saying it. Because yes. I know. I need to proofread.

As far as a follow up story of Claire and Cam's kinky sexcapades, it has been posted! And should be up within the next few days.

Auden JamesAuden Jamesabout 13 years ago
merely ho-hum

poorly motivated plot + actors.

trite execution.

unimaginative fucking.

absurdly smooth devirginized shithole by an 8" pecker.

result: low excitation.

adrianna_marieadrianna_marieabout 13 years ago
Loved it!

I loved it! Soooo good!

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