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Click here"Sir, please!" I yelled.
"Play with your clit and get ready to cum."
I reached down and rubbed and pinched my clit; feeling those soft beginning waves of an orgasm start to ripple. I was so close to coming. My hand was moving quickly over my clit.
"Are you ready?"
"Yes, Sir," I gasped.
"Then cum right now!"
The last word was shouted as he thrust hard once, twice. I exploded into a million pieces! Waves of pleasure radiated from my pussy up to my head and down to my toes.
He thrust a third time, a fourth, and then gave a hoarse yell and froze above me. I continued to throb as his cock jetted warm pulses of semen and filled my ass.
We were both gasping for breath, but my body was beginning to rebel from being in this position for so long, so I started to move my legs. Gabriel managed to free my legs and tried to roll so we were side by side – and promptly fell to the floor with a soft "oomph".
I rolled to the edge of the couch and looked down at him; laughing, then gave a startled shriek when he pulled me over the edge and on top of him
It was his turn to laugh. "I'll always have the last laugh, little girl. Come on." He helped me up as we stood, and then pulled me into a hug. "I was very proud of you tonight. You handled yourself well."
"Thank you, Sir."
He lifted me higher and gave me a deep kiss that tasted like "us".
"Mmmm. Very nice. We'll discuss everything tomorrow. Let's get cleaned up and eat."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoIt’s so refreshing to find a D/s story where the Dom isn’t portrayed as an overbearing arrogant an uncaring jerk.
Richard is a prime example of a shitty Dom. He doesn’t want a relationship with anyone he wants a woman he can turn into a 3 hole object for his use.
I LOVED that Clare was comfortable enough in their relationship to be able to state her case about why she was aroused after the woman reddened her nipples. Communication is absolutely vital in any relationship but more so in a D/s relationship. Thanks for sharing.
maddictover 9 years agoOh that's my responsibility. Sorry that's lame.
Enjoying your adventure, your chapters are drawing me in and are most enjoyable. I'm glad they are not overly abusive but have many elements of control and restraint, something I am now begining to understand. In my younger years I would of smoked a pack of cigarettes by now. On to story # 3 ?
Findmywayalmost 10 years agoI too echo everyones comments. I enjoyed how you were able to highlight the difference between a good and bad Dom.
I would also agree with FA....when I was reading your story the characters felt familiar...while I understand you may not have an order it would be helpful if you highlighted/mentioned this is a continuation or another adventure of their relationship. Halfway through reading I hit your name to see if my hunch was correct about having read part of their story earlier.
Looking forward to more of their adventures.
LoreleiQuinnalmost 10 years agoAuthorThanks for the feedback, FA_JF. There's not really any particular order to my stories at this point, but I'll keep your comment in mind.
FA_JFalmost 10 years agoAnother strong story. If you are going to continue with these two, you might consider something in the titles that will help future readers easily know the order. Sifting through posting dates on an author's page isn't fun.
He makes me nervous and did so in the first story a bit also. The all or nothing threat chafes. His concept of safety shimmers around the edges. If you place someone in danger then swoop in to save them--are you a hero? She was wonderful in the honesty of her answer about F/F. And his grumpy pants response to her honest answer-harumph. But it is interesting to watch how things unfold between them. Looking forward to more
