All Comments on 'Clarissa Ch. 02'

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
I really like this

Please keep it going

Maitre1962Maitre1962over 14 years ago
Well Done !

An excellent piece of writing :) I can't wait for more of this story and any others ,you will produce :)

eager222eager222over 14 years ago
Great!

Loved it, you should continue. :)

DryhillDryhillalmost 14 years ago
STILL GOOD

It is an interesting world/country that you have painted, I hope in future stories you will "flesh out" how it came to be so and what happens if someone does not want to be a slave any longer. Also a prequel about His previous slave and what happened to her would be nice.

I hope we do not have to wait to long before we hear more of these two and His friends/collegues.

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