by lisettepourtoi
An excellent piece of writing :) I can't wait for more of this story and any others ,you will produce :)
It is an interesting world/country that you have painted, I hope in future stories you will "flesh out" how it came to be so and what happens if someone does not want to be a slave any longer. Also a prequel about His previous slave and what happened to her would be nice.
I hope we do not have to wait to long before we hear more of these two and His friends/collegues.