All Comments on 'Click Ch. 02'

by Cyalith

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A great start!

I have read the first instalment and loved it and loved this part too. Jake reminds me of my partner with the teasing and domination, ice is fun. Anyway the reason I wrote a great start is because I hope you continue this story as it is a great read and a huge turn on!!!! I also wish for a happy ending just because I always love a happy ending.

Anyway have fun writing and hope to read more soon!!

Love Nikki xx

LadyPartsLadyPartsover 11 years ago
Very enjoyable

I really liked your story. I like both Jake and Abagail. I'm settling in for a nice long kinky story.

IceWoman73IceWoman73over 11 years ago
YES!!

I've been waiting and waiting for another chapter to this story. I LOVE LOVE LOVE the way you write and I love what you write. OMG I just get so hot and wet reading this... my every fantasy right here in print. Please PLEASE add more chapters soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow....

Incredibly hot! I've read it six times. Please give us a third installment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I can't even...

I'm so in love with this story! Please continue :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
why have you never continued??

this is one of the stories i check frequently, hoping against hope that there's a new chapter. it's brilliantly written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hell yes!!! More please

Amazing. I can't wait till it continues

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wet

Freaking awesome

dev_pafrdev_pafrabout 8 years ago
please

i know it's been a few years, but please consider continuing this story! i love jake

wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyabout 7 years ago
her secret crush 'just good friends' room mate,now the blackmailer who wants her to take erotic punishments that he gives? ;) and seems he had a secret crush on her too!! ;)..wow!!!! hot!!! :))

hey Cyalith:)

a secret crush on her 'just good friends' room mate and now blackmailer!! :) and seems he had a secret crush on her too!! :)hot!!! :))

there's a gentleness in all the roughness!! :) a desperation in his wanting to call her up on her cellphone when he was forced to be away for long and felt alone,just as he used to call in their 'only roommates' phase!! :)

but this cute and handsome guy Jacob or Jake is notorious for getting bored with his girls after a time!! will innocent Abigail be able to handle his breaking away?!...or will Jake stick around for her,always?!:) next chapters please Cyalith!! :)) can hardly wait!! :))

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