All Comments on 'Coincidence'

People who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones. So now he is a cheater and a hypocrite. Guess his wife will befucking him in the ass now. Haha, Love it!!

What goes around comes around, loved it. LMAO Keep up the good writing.

I didn't see it coming. Could have fun with a Ch. 02!

What a fun story and by the way, I agree with you about good 'ole Govenor Colonoscopy.

She made it personal. AND she did it at least TWICE!!

Fun to read and quick to the point. Well done

Pretty hard to get to the punch line. This maybe one time when shortening the story would have made it more effective. Great serendipity at the end.

This was a fun story. Usually cheating wives stories are either heavy on revenge or emotional drama. This reminded me, of all things of an HDK story. There's a leaving of humor that's welcome.

Oh Oh, diddy do Donna ...again?

Great story magmaman. Thanks for sharing on Lit.

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Nice

Everyone was kind of shallow but it was entertaining. Personally I am happy for them since they are now able to try to work things out. The score of two to one is irrelevant.

Just the right light touch, and a great ending.

That was a fun ending to a rather ordinary story. It made me smile, almost an out loud chuckle.

In fact, Stevie Wonder could have seen it. But, it was still fun! Thanks for the story.

this is a good story I presume its going to continue with a good old foursome ??

Obama is the greatest President ever!

No brains, no pains

Just a pair of fuck-ups, they deserve each other, and obama is the worst fuck up since woodrow wilson, may they both rot in hell.

Kinda boring no climax and predictable ending love some of your other ones though. Remeber these comments are only my personal view point

What a hypocrite! Is his transgression any better because it was out of town? No.

Good story, had me laughing and it is something that could be part of that Showtime program, Californication. anyway it put a smile on my face. Thanks.

I like your stories but I detest writers and commenters who blast our President on these sites.

If you do not want Democrats reading your stories...just say so.

Your President is an absolute Socialist and he fully intends to run this country into the ground with FULL Government control...Wake Up!

Mag, I liked your story, what are the odds of Johns' wife being Donna? Small world.

I say that because I have traveled and when you're 5,000 miles from home, out with a woman and as you sit down and cozy with your date, look up and there sits your neighbor woman with a mouth agape look...well, it does happen.

Thanks for the story!

...love the little bits of humor throughout. Great read.

Well done.

Dan

You stupid SOB. This is an erotic site, not a political forum. And for your info you got the wrong party who ran this country into the ground. Try again when you get your talking points right, you ignorant ass.

One of your worst.

Could we get Anonymous banned by complaining about his off topic posting?

If it had been posted in Humour we would have all figured it out ahead of time.

So they knew each other? That does not prove anything!

and now they meet. TK U MLJ LV NV

...it infects everything it touches.

I loved it. Laughed a couple of time and a great ending. Thanks

Well it seems that everyone in this tale is a cheater. Ch.2? Now what?

Didn't see THAT coming. Great story ;-)

Twist of fate

Sweet

The pot calling the kettle black story. You can take the moral high ground when you live there.

Very cute. Good short story.

well the shit really hit the fan when he took the moral high ground...hope she kicks his ass or maybe they end up all fucking together....good little tale....

5*

Grab Donna, say later and leave the two fuckers.

He is just as much a cheating piece of shit as his wife. Hypocrite springs to mind. They deserve each other, and all the diseases that come their way. The high moral ground only goes to those that have morals!

little offering. I thought it was very well done. The irony was terrific and the fact that Donna didn't give a shit if her husband knew or not, classic.

I assumed Donna was John's wife, but I didn't picture the four of them in the back room. There's a ch. 2. Now what?

Here we have all lousy cheaters. They all belong together. Worthless assholes.

Good story. The ending got a big laugh out of me.

Yeah, like one commenter said, there really wasn't a payoff. Maybe there was, though; four cheaters fulminating in a slimy backroom. They are all, each one, their own payoff.

I gotta hand it to you, Mag, that sweet cheat Donna was fkn real, Baby! I was salivating while reading your descriptions of her. She seemed so sexy and natural. I wanted to have a go with her myself.

Jennifer seemed like such a grade A dunce. And why would Donna's hubby shit in his own backyard? I would have liked to know why Donna had such a heel for a hubby.

These people didn't seem very smart.

They have a spouse swapping in John's back room. Frank takes Donna back to his house and John takes Jennifer to his. A few days later this new arrangement becomes permanent. Good writing. Less than favorable plot. No one to favor here. I even hated the cab driver.

double standard

for hypocrites?

What were the chances. Hmmmm.

Theres no moral high ground when both of you cheat.

Sorry, just too fucking "cute".

1 Star

Nothing Donna or Frank said in the office at the bar would lead to any reasonable suspicion that they had done anything but meet somewhere and talk.

If Jennifer and John were psychic enough to divine that Frank and Donna had sex, then why were they caught by surprise in bed together?

Not so cute and more of a cliche is info on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com. Serial cheating wife and details of one of her affairs.

She was college instructor in Helena Montana until info on profile came out. Seems she coerced married student into sex. Told a friend of his wife's about it.

Hell broke loose for student. Not so much for her as her 3rd husband has been ignoring her affairs for years. According to instructor husband is panty sniffer. For close to a year she brought home two full loads of student's seed coating panties then smirked as her husband came in to watch her bathe with psnties pressed to his nose. Now he knew she cheated and no one could be so dumb as to not know what the slimy wet spot was. I read her emils and IMs to student and came to conclusion he got off on the humiliation.

All I had to do is visit Facebook profile and ask for more info.

My request was filled with numerous stories and some photos ofthe 50ish instructor's implanted breasts and the purple rose tattoo next to her bush. Read she has black widow tattoo on left upper back

Thanks for the offering.

leaving no hiding place, TK U MLJ LV NV

Cute little read

who thinks it's cute to write half a story with NO end and waste his reader's time. 1 star for assholes.

Woman don't make the same amount of money as men for doing the same job!! If they are like Donna is in this story that could be the reason: To stupid to breathe on their own! Unless she wanted to get out of her marriage and take Frank's with her too!!! But I didn't get that impression!

Some of these comments haven't aged well.

That last paragraph saved this one for me.

Could you imagine that happening? Lol!

Ending. Yep, Oh, Shit. I just knew who the wife was going to be. Signed: BTW

I'd love to know if this brought them to reconciliation or divorce? I do hate a cheater!

Just more coincidence than I can buy.

Racist, redneck infidelity. How avant guarde.....

Portland OR is such a small place! And why would Sweetie2 drive across town into a rough area to hang out in her disliked hubby’s bar?

hilarious farce...love it!

What a coincidence...

Loved the plot twist at the ending. Big smile on my face.

Doesn't take long to prove your an ass does it? Don't know why I'm the one that usually does it tho!

The ending made it a fun story. Still, it reminded me of the judge in the last episode of the Seinfeld show, who wondered aloud how so many desperate losers could have found themselves all together.

Big ending was great. Surprise!

HaHa! Did not see that coming. Very well done.

No all cheaters

No empathy for anyone so quit and definitely not going to read the second part

I was thinking how much more ironic it would be if the two in Seattle had behaved only to find their spouses had cheated.