Coming Down Off My Hillside Ch. 02

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"This river tried to drown us and take away your house. For now we have won. Let's fuck it."

Carl pushed her against the large rock. Waist down they were in the frigid water. Still playing for hours had them both ready regardless of the situation. Ann rubbed her clit in time with his thrusts and her head lay back against the rock. Her eyes were closed and never had Carl seen anything more beautiful than his woman's eyes contorting in orgasm with her body freezing in the rushing mountain water. The sun was setting but this spot could be seen from a mile in three directions and every front window of the lodge.

When Carl announced loudly, "I'm cuming," Ann screamed "Fuck Me" and her words echoed back and forth while he spurted into her belly.

For moments he lay on her, both of them shivering.

"Damn, river is winning again. My balls have shrunk up to bb size and my cock is frozen into your pussy. Let's get inside by the fire and see if we can save any of our parts."

As they struggled naked out of the rushing water, over the rocks that neither of them had noticed on the way in, Ann asked, "Who's bright idea was making it in the river?"

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Horseman68Horseman684 months ago

A very entertaining read, even with the name change and disappearing pregnancy.

biggeoff35biggeoff35almost 2 years ago

you changed the name of the male lead, dumped ann's pregnancy and turned her into a complete bitch?

the first part was beautiful, the second was crap

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Carl was a chump

Ricked his life to save her property, gave her a million dollar business and she chose a wife beating child rapist

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"A breathless Linda flew through the door late one Wednesday afternoon, "Rick, hit mom!"

"Not my problem"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Severe dissointment. Would rate 0 if I could.

This story should be renamed as it has too many differences from the first story. Author really needs an editor. Does not belong in romance as it is more a cheating and cuckold story with a week ass wimp as the main character. This story just pissed me off. Chapter one was "okay" but this chapter had me disgusted. Sadly I'd like to say this is also unrealistic but unfortunately there are a lot of really stupid people and more then a fair share of users who claim they are in love but are only capable of taking advantage of others.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsabout 8 years ago
this isn't chapter two

This is a different story not a second chapter.

In "Ch. 01" the lead man is Paul and Ann is pregnant with his child at the end.

In this story the lead man is Carl.

In this story there is no mention of a pregnancy.

Did she miscarry?

Did she abort it to keep Rick happy?

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