All Comments on 'Coming Home'

Good story but some how her being blind folded all most the whole time left out alot of juicy things you could have put in there

to make it erotic. we need to know at least a little about the characters to have feelings for them

Interesting spelling for some of the words.... But this is by far the most erotic story I've read here. The set up and build up are on point and it's such a lovely read.

Beautiful