All Comments on 'Coming to America'

it's good. You've got a nice style and an eye for detail, and it reads well. I would have rated it higher if the sex scene weren't so improbable, but, hey, it's your fantasy.

100% for all the work you put into it.

If that is your fantasy, you are a sick dude!

Good writing but guess your imagination can catch up with it

Well, I've never been called a sick man before! Thank you, but really, it's just a story and not my fantasy - my fantasy comes in Pt.2! ;-)