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amsterdamamsterdamover 18 years agoAuthor
That's funny!

Well, I've never been called a sick man before! Thank you, but really, it's just a story and not my fantasy - my fantasy comes in Pt.2! ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good writing

Good writing but guess your imagination can catch up with it

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Honesty would have been better

If that is your fantasy, you are a sick dude!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Well, um...

it's good. You've got a nice style and an eye for detail, and it reads well. I would have rated it higher if the sex scene weren't so improbable, but, hey, it's your fantasy.

100% for all the work you put into it.

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