All Comments on 'Confessions of a Female Libertine Ch. 02'

by JillClarke1982

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RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 13 years ago
Clinical

The story was well-written in that it coveyed the sense that the reader was sitting there watching a video of the events being described. At that same time, this style gave it a feeling of detachment that I didn't find very erotic. Just my personal preference, I guess.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

This and the previous installment by the same author reminded me of a stage production featuring my wife naked and being penetrated vaginally by four different young men in sequence as they acted out a gangbang on stage. The script called for only simulated penetrations, but after the first few performances they decided to go for real, since the venue was small and the audience was close enough to the stage to easily tell the difference. The play was an adaptation of Terry Southern's "Candy". Although the original story had her fuck a long train of men, being a prominent and wellknown member of the community, she drew the line at just four. As in the present story, she opened her legs to the audience and commented as each male actor entered her. Since it was billed as a farce, when the fourth man pulled out of her she rolled over to reveal the temporary tattoo on her butt cheeks: THE END, as the curtain came down.

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