All Comments on 'Connor Thomas'

This story has a great start to a longer piece. I really think you could do great exploring the coupling of Vivian and Connor. Plus you have some many others you could delve into.

I love the way Vivian takes control of Connor and he cannot say now to his pent up urges! I would love to see her turn him if she is a real vampire.Then she and him can seduce his girlfriend into a vampire threesome!

I'm a big Misfits fan as well as tattoo's this is something I have been wanting to see for along time!!! my life vamped up..lol...great job

I'll read the first five chapters before I judge but... your protagonist Connor, thought he had a gf... Kayla?

So... and I'm not one to judge cause I've done it myself as a teen. He has a GF, in college... with him, most likely... but because she's a diligent student and doesn't go out during the week to party.

Connor hooks up with vampire chick?

i have read this whole story five times and still love it

He is a shallow person, he is charter that I think is the worst and interesting,he's unfaithful,who would want to read about someone like that were a woman shows her boobs and works him like putty why do writers take a good Idea and ruin it

The dude is slim ,who cheers for someone like him 'if he supposed to care for his girlfriend so much you should have given him some morals at least instead you made him a slut,cheating on your girlfriend is the lowest thing you can do.