All Comments on 'Control Issues: More'

Damned near fell asleep reading this one. Very boring!

"He could shine a light into her imagination..." This is a great phrase! I know exactly what you were trying to say. Another winner, Cate.

Cathleen,

Your story was just lovely. So natural, the dialogue, your description abilities are first rate. Congratulations on another Winner!

So erotic and lustful

I loved it.