All Comments on 'Cottage 13 Pt. 01'

I was sorry that Becky could recognise Doug when he entered. However, could we have more chapters, please. Next time, let's have the rapist perhaps fuse the lighting and wait a time for suspense, and make sure that Becky fails to recognise him. So that there can be a real uncertainty in Becky about who this is. Or perhaps, have someone claiming to be a late substitute?