All Comments on 'Crossing Moon Ch. 09'

Loved this chapter. I so wished that max would have been able to kick Michael's ass! lol, that would have been something! I cant wait for the 3 of them to come back home during their break! Its about time Avie and Max see one another!

I can't wait for the next chapters! I really wanna know what happens next next!! Plzz hurry with the next chapter!!!

Arleen

I'm enjoying the story but is english your second language? The dialog doesn't really flow and perhaps needs a good editor?

Hi all! To "Anonymous in New Zealand" - yes, English is my second language hehe... and to "Anonymous in USA and Canada" - hope you guys will love the next chapter, I'm currently still writing chapter 12... thanks all!!