by LaPatitMort
An interesting mix; believable and sensitive enough but arousing. Obviously begs for more and an explanation of why that was the last night (the 'Danish' officer?)
I got to admit that with one line you elevated this story for me from a simple sexcapade into something with a little more emotional edge: That being we, the reader, are foreshadowed that this tryst is not destined to last and the girl will leave the protagonist soon enough for a younger buck.
Very well written and enjoyable.