by kanatawolf
If you and she are Cuban, wouldn't you know how to spell such simple Spanish?
Yo Diaz... try "Dios mío"
Unbelievable.
Since you never said that YOU were Cuban, the Spanish issues were not a problem for me. I don't know the difference...but, if you're gonna write phrases in Spanish then translate them, they should be correct, so...research would've helped you there. However, I did enjoy the actual story, it was written pretty well although there were a few typos (I hope that's what they were :D) within the English speaking parts, too. Daddy / daughter/step-daughter stories are my favs, and I give this 4 stars because you did a damn fine job writing the erotica elements...Thanks kanatawolf for the sexy story ;-)