by kanatawolf
Since you never said that YOU were Cuban, the Spanish issues were not a problem for me. I don't know the difference...but, if you're gonna write phrases in Spanish then translate them, they should be correct, so...research would've helped you there. However, I did enjoy the actual story, it was written pretty well although there were a few typos (I hope that's what they were :D) within the English speaking parts, too. Daddy / daughter/step-daughter stories are my favs, and I give this 4 stars because you did a damn fine job writing the erotica elements...Thanks kanatawolf for the sexy story ;-)
If you and she are Cuban, wouldn't you know how to spell such simple Spanish?
Yo Diaz... try "Dios mío"
Unbelievable.