All Comments on 'Cuckold Husband and Father Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh yes

More please more!

Calit69Calit69over 14 years ago
Wow

You have a vivid imagination and a definte gift for story telling. Build up tantalisingly erotic,defintely love to read more. The permutations are considerable thanks

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
A good story just seems to be dragging a little

A good story with a good scenario and theme, but it seems to be a little long winded with the rehash of the first chapter at the beginning. It may be just that the story hasn't moved along very much is what is making it seem long winded. It's still a good story, and I'll be wanting to read the next chapter. Thanks....Rich

Many FeathersMany Feathersover 14 years ago
Oh yeah...

Dad's about to get his, mom's about to watch him when he does, and the daughter's about to discover a whole new world that she didn't even know existed.

Very naughty tale here sweetheart, you continue to do an excellent job here!

*big kiss*

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
SUPERB

Actually, it needs to be drawn out a bit because it is going to get very very naughty soon. Can't wait for chapters three through ten or more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
OMG

Great job, way to leave us wanting more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fantastic work!

Both stories absolutely great! Your ability for explaining something very important about the need to be accepted and understood as being a "true man" even though you're submissive, is making the story extremely good! I have read hundreds of stories where the author fail to explain this critical information, since this sort of submission is extremely psychological.

Apart from that, great build. Slowly, implementing love, care and affection, as well as accept and understanding; implemending a slow, steady and increasingly naughty build.

5 stars from here!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
FUCKING SICK...

Since when is a story of incest good, great etc. What a fucking loser, and your poor inbred family will suffer for ever because of your no good stupid assed shit. You should rot in hell you fucked up piece of shit...

garyr19680garyr19680about 14 years ago
Just re-read it!

I just finished reading it again after several months, I was hoping that you would have some chapters by now. It's a good story with a nice twist, and well told. Please, can we have some more?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great story

Please add the next chapters. We all want to see where you take this story next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good

When will it be continued?

CACTUS462CACTUS462over 13 years ago
bugga

still loved it, real nice twist, plsssss continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Oh, you tease!

U tease us so much - We know he's going to fuck both

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
what they said!!!

TEASE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Next Chapter

Next chapter, please!!!! This chapter was VERY hot. We really want to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
oh tease

next part plz. . . . . .

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
PLEASE

Please write the third chapter! Get his daughter in that cheerleader outfit, yank that blindfold off and let the old boy really fulfill his true fantasy of fucking his daughter. The wife has just been a substitute, she has been the one giving him these erections. Please finish it.

wifespantyboywifespantyboyalmost 12 years ago
More Please

Please don't leave us hanging. We MUST have more please!!! Please let Mommy and Daddy find out just what a kinky dominating daughter they have. Taking control of Mommy, daddy and Uncle too.

Thank you for writing and Please continue.

montywingermontywingerover 11 years ago
Pleeese

You can't stop now, the fun is just starting.

Please complete this erotic masterpiece for us.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Give us more!

More, Give us more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I am so glad a woman wrote this. I am a man that craves sexual humuliation and to know a woman understands this gives me hope of finding a dominate woman.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Oh please

Stop now! Unbelievable, implausible tripe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What a pile of manure

And she thinks it's okay to show her daughter their private sex games? This is going to be good for her daughter? Good for her daughters' relationship with her Father? What a bitch. When he gets up, before he divorces her, he's going to break it off in her ass. With a fair amount of luck and a good attorney he might be able to get her sent to jail. If not, bury the bitch in the backyard. She deserves it. Even for fiction, sickening story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Just god awful

If this isn't the worst story on this site, it certainly makes the hall of shame list. What a complete waste of space. Not a single interesting, clever or entertaining thing about it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Glad you never continued this garbage.

The whole thing was just horrible. He should have just divorced the bitch and never spoke to either of them ever again. Better yet, bury them both in a nearby swamp.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love it!

Please continue!!

theghostwritertheghostwriteralmost 9 years ago
More

This is a wonderful story - just wish we could have the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Cliff hanger?!

Please do the continuation!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Next episode...

This definitely needs to continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
can't wait to read more

not as hot as the first part but still had to jack oiff while reading it please keep it cumming

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
like the story butt.......

I am just sorry you never finished it

SpygmanSpygmanover 2 years ago

Please continue this hot story

smooth_Ballssmooth_Ballsover 1 year ago

and then, no third chapter? Now that's tease and denial to the cube

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Should of had some chastity cage play in this too..

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

To bad there wasn't a third chapter..

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

where is the rest?!

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