by BethB
not as hot as the first part but still had to jack oiff while reading it please keep it cumming
This is a wonderful story - just wish we could have the next installment
The whole thing was just horrible. He should have just divorced the bitch and never spoke to either of them ever again. Better yet, bury them both in a nearby swamp.
If this isn't the worst story on this site, it certainly makes the hall of shame list. What a complete waste of space. Not a single interesting, clever or entertaining thing about it.
And she thinks it's okay to show her daughter their private sex games? This is going to be good for her daughter? Good for her daughters' relationship with her Father? What a bitch. When he gets up, before he divorces her, he's going to break it off in her ass. With a fair amount of luck and a good attorney he might be able to get her sent to jail. If not, bury the bitch in the backyard. She deserves it. Even for fiction, sickening story.
I am so glad a woman wrote this. I am a man that craves sexual humuliation and to know a woman understands this gives me hope of finding a dominate woman.
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You can't stop now, the fun is just starting.
Please complete this erotic masterpiece for us.
Please don't leave us hanging. We MUST have more please!!! Please let Mommy and Daddy find out just what a kinky dominating daughter they have. Taking control of Mommy, daddy and Uncle too.
Thank you for writing and Please continue.
Please write the third chapter! Get his daughter in that cheerleader outfit, yank that blindfold off and let the old boy really fulfill his true fantasy of fucking his daughter. The wife has just been a substitute, she has been the one giving him these erections. Please finish it.
Next chapter, please!!!! This chapter was VERY hot. We really want to see what happens next!
Please add the next chapters. We all want to see where you take this story next.
I just finished reading it again after several months, I was hoping that you would have some chapters by now. It's a good story with a nice twist, and well told. Please, can we have some more?
Since when is a story of incest good, great etc. What a fucking loser, and your poor inbred family will suffer for ever because of your no good stupid assed shit. You should rot in hell you fucked up piece of shit...
Both stories absolutely great! Your ability for explaining something very important about the need to be accepted and understood as being a "true man" even though you're submissive, is making the story extremely good! I have read hundreds of stories where the author fail to explain this critical information, since this sort of submission is extremely psychological.
Apart from that, great build. Slowly, implementing love, care and affection, as well as accept and understanding; implemending a slow, steady and increasingly naughty build.
5 stars from here!
Actually, it needs to be drawn out a bit because it is going to get very very naughty soon. Can't wait for chapters three through ten or more.
Dad's about to get his, mom's about to watch him when he does, and the daughter's about to discover a whole new world that she didn't even know existed.
Very naughty tale here sweetheart, you continue to do an excellent job here!
*big kiss*
A good story with a good scenario and theme, but it seems to be a little long winded with the rehash of the first chapter at the beginning. It may be just that the story hasn't moved along very much is what is making it seem long winded. It's still a good story, and I'll be wanting to read the next chapter. Thanks....Rich
You have a vivid imagination and a definte gift for story telling. Build up tantalisingly erotic,defintely love to read more. The permutations are considerable thanks