by vyasya
Please do not rewrite "Cuckolded By Boss" script, tou have a great thoughts. Use them!
This story is so erotic. Get's better and better.
You Are writing this "pain & pleasure" subject very well.
Please continue.
I'm so tired of idiot comments like the one below.
What if you were right that this story is "for the few"? So what?
Why don't you stick to the genres _you_ prefer?
Why is it important for you to make people stop writing stories that don't suit your particular taste?
You are an intolerant jerk but this story is brilliant.
More please!
Carry on but please reduce interval between installmemts.
Lets have Kishanchanji impose more conditions to restrict sex between vinit & his wife. Vinit to be made into proper cuckold & kishanchanji to have sole unrestricted rights to his wife. Carry story ro conclusion with pregnancy (with Kishanchanji as the father).
Put some action in the story.....and dont just concentrate on humiliating her hubby.
I love this story, one of my favorites...very hot, please continue!!! Love it.
Continue this story man .. this is ultimate, i like all your stories .. but dont keep us waiting for longer time
please write more on this scenario like manisha and kishanchand going on a vacation with vineet as their errand boy and so on.please please
PLEASE DONT LEAVE US HANGING, WHAT A GREAT STORY, I WANT TO KNOW WHAT SHE GIVES HIM IN THE KITCHEN
i absoultely loved your story and the skillfully way you portrayed the experiences, letting us experience some of the thrilling humiliation you felt and building the story up to climax after climax (i know i had several!). Your tale reminded me of my and my wife's experience with an Indian man for whom she worked in his store. He was a lot like your rival and my wife is white, the similarities were startling. My wife came to love being used by him and ultimately some other Indian men. They seemed to think of both of us as inferior and that added to the thrill. Would love to hear more from you. chris
I earlier commented but meant to say there were so many erotic and arousing moments that you recounted that absolutely thrilled and brought me to hardness. However, aside from the vows (which was brilliant) there was one statement by the wife that summed it all up. It was when her lover had left to make a call and she and her hubby were talking and she revealed that she was so hot and wished they had more time so they could have sex. Her choice of man was clear. She would not have sex with her husband if her lover was going to make an appearance soon. My wife became like that with her Indian lover too. thanks again for the hot story. chris doctoryes48@hotmail.com
love all your great story!!!!I love the shyness and lust of the wife you described...
hi vyasa,
please continue the story with sequels how manisha became pregnant by kishanchanji. Also slowly allow his friends to have her including group orgy.
Dear vyasya,you are an awesome writer. don't you think beaing a good writer,you are responcible to finish the story for readers shake. parhaps you are not been able to contact with the guy,you need to finish the story with your imagination. and i'm belive that you can do that very well. don't hang us like that.
Without a doubt of the most well written and erotic stories in the cuckolding genre on literotica. I wish this could be continued. Alas with som many years gone by, I guess that wont happen, a real pity.
there should be more on this that how this kishanji takes her after she agrees to him, and also some thing for her husband to see like video recording or something.and they go away some where.
you are an awesome writer,please would love to read more.
this is very intrsting plot, you should write more here.
Hope it continues. My wife And I are both so turned on by The older Indian man's power over the couple. We once rented an apt from a older Indian man in Brighton. An arrogant sort. My wife said I let him treat me like a servant. But we both had fantasies about my white wife wearing Indian dresses like sarees with bangles and becoming his whore. The very excellent writer has reawakened the old longings.
this is EROTIC stuff
would love to read more in this series.
please do continue this story.
Hi Vyasa,
This story till now is ultimate and highly erotic.
I read your other stories too;
you really write so good.
Please don't leave this story unfinished;
and please please continue it.
I am excited to hear what happens next.
with love.
pranati.
Must be, just read their stories and their comments !!
great story! my wife loved indian guys too much as well!!
Hey vyasya, you're an amazing writer, gifted, and this story is a lot of fans' favourite story...on behalf of all your fans, please write chapter 7 of this story, we trust you can make up something, after all, you're one heck of a imaginative individual (as seen from your other works). So please, on behalf of all your fans, please release the next chapter of this story! We are all sick of waiting, please!
hi vyasya, very erotic narration by u. but plz complete this.
extremely good story.please write something about manish n kishenchand going to a honeymoon with vineet as an errand boy
I don't care much for your other stories but what a pity you never finished this one. My alltime favourite on Literotica!
Is there no hope of you finishing this story?
This story is certainly not truly Indian, remember reading in another place, and has being adapted to an Indian story.the end clearly seems to be fantasy.
It is great that you are continuing the neighbour series. Have a suhaag raat where he will take her anal virginity. She will bring a glass of milk and they share half of it first. Then he will insert his fingers in the glass and make her drink some more, then he will insert his toes and make her drink some more, then he will insert his cock and make her drink some more. Finally, after fucking her anally without a condom, he will cum in the glass and make her finish the milk. Have some atm stuff as well but no scat or anything like that.
they didn't have sex in the kitchen after their I do's in Vinits presence ?
or it will be told from manisha's point of view?
would love to read that ;)
Most of hubbies takes vaginal virginity but when other man starts dating wife it is his right to take anal virginity.
Parag a friend of mine fell in love with my wife. After 14 sessions of hot romance he opened her Anal Gate on their 15th anniversary of fucking.