by Tx Tall Tales
I wish the author hadn't added other males... I'm not into that kind of sharing, so this was the last chapter for me
Good for Jim! He's perfect for her. She's a control freak , and at least in the beginning he would love it. Once he gained some experience he could start winging it on his own. So he has a short dick. A weapon is only as good as the shooter. Keep hitting the bullseye and anything is possible.
Good job, thanks for sharing your work!
Too much control. Making all the other men beta or something to protagonist alpha!
Probably the third time I've read the series, betcha this is the first vote I've given you. Sorry, but at least it's a 5.
I gave it 5* last time. I cannot vote again because Literotica remembers my vote from last time, but, if I could, I would give it another 5*.
One complaint: "talking to both Jim and I." should be "talking to both Jim and me.".
Surely you would not say "talking to I". At least I hope not!
But i'm contemplating telling yer mom
Second time through the series. Sorry I haven't voted before... OF COURSE you get 5 stars. Big fan of Tx Tall Tales' writing!
... I read it a long time ago. I am enjoying rereading it. *****
A grammatical note: "...and talking to both Jim and I." should be "...and talking to both Jim and me." 9 times out of 10, if you are thinking "and I" it should be "and me".
Authors take note. Jack's trash became Jim's treasure. Ok I'm being a little harsh, but the underlying principle of giving character whose usefulness has largely expired a grand bon voyagé fà rewell installment still applies.
You have a great writing style and a good story line. Very enjoyable.
I only joined Literotica about a week ago. So far you are by far my favorite author. Sure hope you keep it up (pun intended).
I wish my post college years were something like Jack's or I wish I could have at least found my own harem to be a part of.
Started reading these parts on & off all day.. which mean's I've been turned on & off all day too.. Jack is such a devil, making me horny to be a slut like Karen, that I'm just going to keep reading (and keeping a hand down my panties too!) ;)
This is the first story of yours that I've read, and it's a total winner. Joined Literotica about a week ago, and don't understand why so few people take the time to comment. I'm only the eighth person out of 174,423 other viewers to make a public comment here. That seems criminal. I would have conservatively expected at least a thousand.
Tex, you definitely have a gift and you enjoy using it.
I like the characters in this series, their growth and development throughout, and the sex scenes are especially delicious. Granted, the whole thing is fantastic to believe and requires some suspension of belief, but that's what it makes so much fun.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
I wish I was Karen, I never did anything like that but it sure made my blood boil and my pussy drip. Thank you. Go on with the good work.
Rucille
Man, you wrote my life-long dream! The whole thing!!! Keep it going, please.
An outstanding tale, please continue. I'll read it again. Again keep up the good work and don't make us wait too long for the next installment
Dear Tx... thanks so much for continuing this story... it's just dynamite. By the time I got to the end, my nipples were hard, my pussy soft and wet and I was ready for Jack and Jim to double team me :-). I love your love of fucking and your love of women... of all types, shapes and personalities. I love your stories. Thanks for sharing.
EmmaB