All Comments on 'Cyber Cheat'

The beginning was nice but dont you think the end was a little bit too fast ?

I really liked your Cyber Cheat story. I guess I liked it cos it was real and it could actually happen. Secretly tho, I had hoped when you got the message online, it would be Mark trying to win you back thru chat. Oh, don't forget to use the spellchecker next time.

Rough, raw, gripping. The anger of your character rings true. 10/10 for ingenuity.

Well-written, emotional and sad. Hope this is just fiction and not a slice of life.

It seems to me that she is well rid of Mark. Good story.

I found the story to be interesting, but didn't find it sexually stimulating, (then that might not be what you were shooting for). I am sure you are often asked whether the story is/was semi-autobiographical in nature? So...? Sad story either way. Seems like a waste of a hot woman. But than you already know that too.

Thanks for writing

I liked this story a lot because it had a plausible story line and wasn't emotionally empty. It wasn't what I was looking for, but I got hooked.

keep writing.