by romanticredhead
That was beautiful, I came at the same time as you! I have had several dates off the internet but none as fab as yours. My boyfriend Tom and I met on a beach when we were with other partners and we love to be watched. Do you? Perhaps you would like to read how he met me in very sexy detail? It's called 24 Hours.
Love Sue xx
The initial part, the waiting, all the thoughts running in mind before you meet him, really good
. . . beautifully told. As always, I loved the exquisite detail and the slow, smoldering buildup.
As a female who enjoys reading erotica I found this piece truly explosive. Everything a girl would want her first time to be and everything we dream a guy would be. You nailed it ;-) My advice to you is to let this be as it is. Sequels take the power away from the actual story.