All Comments on 'Dad Did a Bad, Bad, Bad Thing Ch. 01'

You really stink.

You need to write somewhere else if you think this is erotic. For instance a a Non-erotic racist website.

another great story idea, waiting for the next part and thanks for posting...

Stay in Nigeria and wallow in the shit of your own people.

Don't quit your day job, because this is some of the most bullshit writing I've ever seen on this site. None of the characters are even remotely believable and no loan shark black or otherwise is going to absolve any debt by these means. Cash is king with them, so the whole plot-line of your story is nothing but sick and twisted fantasy on your part period.

I actually enjoyed this story and hope you continue it. I know it's not supposed to be realistic and I found the idea of the daughter watching the mother and being next to her very hot. PLEASE CONTINUE!

Your stories are cool in a twisted way. I would also have to say that they are basically degrading but you are definitely not the first and won't be the last. What I would recommend is that your future stories would be completely different and unpredictable as all your existing ones.

the idea is good but at times it is a little hard to read. I would suggest that you use an editor

I loved this story if these fuck wads don't that's their loss i enjoyed it keep em coming

Dsoul knows how to arouse and humiliate us white boi's.

My strongest fantasy is to come home and hear my wife moaning and the bed squeaking. When I go in the back I see two blacks standing by our bed as a third has my Asian wife on her stomach fucking her as deep as he can from behind. I can see her pushing her ass up as he pumps his super thick cock in her stretched out pussy as he makes her cum. The two other men look at me and as they stroke their stiff cocks calling her a whore for blackcocks tell me “ she always moans and cums like a whore when we take that shit”.

She doesn’t even notice me as she screams and cums for them.