All Comments on 'Daddy and Little One Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Intrguing

story,not sure whether it's going to be a 'Gigi' or a 'Trilby'

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
That's the hottest story I've ever read!

Keep writing and posting chapters! Not stating Little One's age leaves so much to the imagination! I'll not say how young I think she is!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
mmm..

This is very exciting..a nice look into Daddy's mind.

AnadaAtSeaAnadaAtSeaalmost 18 years ago
Whew!

This chapter made me very wet, imagining Daddy at the mirror, wishing I could be there, smelling him, seeing him, touching him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Mmmmm

You really have a way with words.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Story I like it

...but could you not make longer and fewer chapters?

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