by ladyphoenix
This one is for the girls, or some of them at least.
I thought it was badly written, a little childish even though the content is meant to be adult. The dialogue didn't work and whoever invented the word precum should have been taken outside and shot years ago.
I liked the story except for the violence of the father and if it's fantasy the daughter should have been much younger. If she's not going to get fucked she should be too young to fuck. To each her/his own. My preference would be to have the daughter be prepubescent. But that's just my own preference.
Almost made me cum just reading it too, Soooo fucking hot I love it. My pussy is soaked!
Well at first to be honest i thought what could this person be thinking and as i got deeper into the story my pussy started to thump warm un and get wet. I believed i was in the story. I loved how rude and how she wanted ut but didnt amazing! I give you all starz! Almost made me cum just reading it!
No Excuse for Rape!
I have nothing against father daughter sex if that's what they both want.
Wow I would love to have my father do something like that to me. I am rubbing my pussy while reading this story and thinking about it.
I'm not just wet I'm sitying in a pool of cum. Now I just need to find someone to act it out with me.
I need a daddy just like that! Love your imagination...makes me soooo wet.
the father's domination of her is so hot! i cant stop rubbing my pussy
bump that! just a fantasy! i admit the treatment is a little harsh, but oh my, do you have a flair for writing! this is so well written... and so hot =)