All Comments on 'Daddy's Birthday'

To find a father/son story on here, and even more rare to have it be so loving. Thank you for that. Since, I, myself, am not a gay male, I am wondering if that is normal to not use any sort of lube for a first time with a huge member? I guess I was expecting a blowjob and/or a good rimming prior to it. They were in the dining room... close to the kitchen... olive oil, perhaps? I dunno. Just some observations. I do hope you continue. I personally like the story of just the two of them, but I'm sure others will want you to include the friend or friends, plural. Whatever you decide, please keep it loving. Too many stories on here turn things so cheap, so quickly.

You're absolutely right. Where was my head? Yes, lube is super important, and generally something I make sure to include in my stories. I will try to remember for next time, again not sure where my head was.

As far as continuing/adding more characters etc. I wasn't actually planning on continuing this story, it's just a one-shot. I really do agree with you though, things can get cheap really quickly, and I generally prefer more realistic scenarios - well as realistic as you can get with incest.

Thanks for the comment. :)

-Jack

Loved the father-son story. Loved Dad'd hairy chest and large cock, and the love that develops between father and son. Write more!

I'm always so girlish with my dad

As I mentioned in your other story father son incest isn't my cup of tea. I tried I got 1/4 of the way through but couldn't continue. It is in no way a reflection of your writing more my personal taste. Though you've achieved a major feat by actually enticing me to read some of it normally I give this taboo A wide berth and avoid it like the plague.

I kinda wish I was a gay guy sometimes, but sadly I'm just a bi female. Oddly enough, gay incest has always turned me on, gay doctor, gay teacher etc. I don't like straight stories, only lesbian or gay.. Of course I have weird fetishes too, but yeahh.. So you're story was absolutely amazing! I came so many times, I think I lost count after 8, but it was really powerful and I just love the words 'loving' or 'soothing' and what not, because it ties in to the love portion of the story, instead of it being worthless sex. There need to be authors like you and I read your bio, you're busy! But, truly you should write. If you're not already a writer, look into it. The way your sentences flowed was beautiful. I'm 18 myself, and a guy virgin, but I will bookmark this for those nights I need something special. Love, love love! xoxo Belle

Hey everyone, just wanted to thank you for your comments!

@Anon 10/17/14

Don't apologize for not being able to read this, if it's not your thing, it's not your thing. No hard feelings. I will make sure I put a warning before all my father/son incest stories, now that I know you follow my writing.

Is this story real?? Its amazing

I loved the story, gay incest has always turned me on. I had a gay, incestuous relationship at the age of 47, with one of my uncles who was 63 at the time. It was by far the most intense sexual and emotional relationship I have ever been in.

This story reminds me so much of what I was in. Fucking Kinky hot.

I couldn't of said it any better, I totally agree with everyone that has posted a response, very well written and very hot too. Love love love!!! Keep it coming so I can too ;-)

This has got to be one of the hottest things I've ever read. I keep coming back to it. Is it based on anything?

So hot

love this one.makes me all warm and fuzzy.

that as I read this great story, well written, hot and loving I kept thinking how cruel it would have been of a loving Dad with a big dick to fuck his son's virgin ass with a bit of spit and dried fingers.

Then I read the comments of one anon and yours and saw that I was not alone. I like to get my ass fucked but I get it lubed first.

Never had a 9" cock but would like to try very much!

mmm I liked that one. My virgin ass needs a daddy toooo. I dream of guys with large cocks having me any way they want to. Someone please!

fangirl!!!!!

I wish I was a boy and I get fucked up with my dad like this!!!!

I love this story,,,it made me fill like falling in love with my dad,,,I love virgin boy x dad...!!!!!

i love the stripper job. totally added to it

I LOVE BEING A FAGGOT,I USED TO SUCK MY DAD'S COCK ALL THE TIME,IT WAS AWESOME,

I'll go along with the other comments really hot story written very well n also a big fan of daddy dick

Like this story

Love how the son was adored and loved by his daddy. Would enjoy reading about their further sexual experiences. Especially if they begin having sex while out and about! Lol

I love reading such stories and jacking off and orgasming while reading such stories

Love the anticipation, daddy taking his boys tight ass filling him up.....

Awesome!

Awesome story.

I love it.

wish this was a series! so good and so much potential for where it can go