All Comments on 'Damaged Ch. 07'

by TrueNorth1969

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Love it!

I love the new subtle changes you've added to this chapter. Love it love it love it! I can't wait to read Ch. 8 and see what other new mysteries you've concocted! Great job as always! ~ S

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Whoa!

I've said it before and I'll say it again you're brilliant! This story as twisted as it may be has got me so completely captivated its not even funny. That Sophia. . .Ice Queen is not even the word to describe that . . . Well you know *laughs* keep it can't wait for the next chapters!

spearman1spearman1about 15 years ago
Holy Crap!!!

That chick is a major bitch!! Can you write a house falling on top of her like the witch on the wizard of oz? Good grief I have never wanted someone to get hurt or die like I want for that woman. Great writing.

lancewmlancewmabout 15 years ago
Excellent story and writing

You have the gift....

lancewmlancewmabout 15 years ago
Excellent story and writing

You have the gift....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Ahhh....

I hate it when you do that...leaving us on pins and needles, that is. LOL Please write longer chapters. LOL I love this story and it just keeps getting better and better. I feel so sorry for Dean. He needs Ms. Yao for a mother! It's time for Sophia to get what's she deserves. Thanks for sharing.

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