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Click hereAlex stuffed the page in his pack and helped Julie don hers. An hour later something dawned on her.
"Where are my panties?"
Alex shrugged. "I guess we left them by the log."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoEver going to submit the next part that was almost finished back in August last year?
julie95over 10 years agoAuthorThank you for the great feedback! This was my first attempt at something longer than a short story. Unfortunately I am a slow writer and an even slower editor, but I am almost finished with the next part. Any and all feedback is cherished!
Anonymousover 10 years agoconflict, an antagonist, something to create tension, going to lose readers fast otherwise.
