All Comments on 'Damsels in Distress on a Lake'

Well done, fine fantasy!

Let's see more of this story.

Great story, well written. Would love to hear about the trip home and subsequent development of their relationships.

The big one that didn't get away heh -

One of the top 10 male fantasies - a mom and a daughter together - ROFL.

Sorry. That low score was a fumble, and once it was done I couldn't correct it. Please, remove it if you can.

Would love to read more of this story.

Is this a stand alone story or does it continue in one of your other stories ?

More lake stories, please. You do them well.

So what happens next?

Cute, well told story.

You’re a fine writer. To some extent your stories are sexual fairytales. Sometimes you add detail (e.g., about fishing or camping) that make the stories feel more real. Other times you miss the opportunity to add those details. For example, instead of “It’s simple . . . St. James is” I might suggest,

I shrugged, “You know where Rolla is, right?”

She started. “Rolla, Missouri?”

“Yep.”

She gave me a hard look. “What’s in Rolla?”

“Me.”

“For real?”

Where is the rest of the story? I like your stories but some of them should have more to them, like this one.