by m_storyman_x
Where is the rest of the story? I like your stories but some of them should have more to them, like this one.
You’re a fine writer. To some extent your stories are sexual fairytales. Sometimes you add detail (e.g., about fishing or camping) that make the stories feel more real. Other times you miss the opportunity to add those details. For example, instead of “It’s simple . . . St. James is” I might suggest,
I shrugged, “You know where Rolla is, right?”
She started. “Rolla, Missouri?”
“Yep.”
She gave me a hard look. “What’s in Rolla?”
“Me.”
“For real?”
Is this a stand alone story or does it continue in one of your other stories ?
Sorry. That low score was a fumble, and once it was done I couldn't correct it. Please, remove it if you can.
The big one that didn't get away heh -
One of the top 10 male fantasies - a mom and a daughter together - ROFL.
Great story, well written. Would love to hear about the trip home and subsequent development of their relationships.