All Comments on 'Dance with the Devil Ch. 04'

can't wait for the falling in love part! Good writing (: <3 Lillian, KR.

I like the heat and passion they both heve towards each other and cant wait for the moment they begin to fall in love. Super work and well written.

I think that would drive Marcellus nuts... but it would be what he wants her to do...

I loved this chapter . But chapters are way too short.. Post asap . Thx

This story is just fantastic. I would also love if the chaps were at least 2 pg's long. Can't wait for the next part!

I am truly enjoying this story.

Why? Just why wold he give her money like that? She defiantly not gonna wanna see him again. That was the dumbest thing he could have ever done. I can't beleive he did that. Can't wait see how he plans to beg for her back....ha ha ha.

more ASAP

I LOVE THIS STORY. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Why would he leave money like that?? Why isnt he flying back with her?? WHy why why??

i love this storyyyyy

I like the premise of the story but I think you need to elaborate on why he has feelings for her. The movement from one scene to another is too quick. But I agree, it doesn't make sense why he left her money like she was a call her. She was paying off her brother's debt. All well, once again I think your story has potential just a little more background to them. Thanks for writing it!

Dude, He did her dirty. Can't wait to read more.

I was just wondering if there was a chance of Darien getting pregnant :D That would be so fucking cool! And it would drive the guy NUTS. Can't wait for the next chapt!

Your series deserves a zero. Not only do you ignore your readers but you aren't generous enough to post the missing chapter. I refuse to read any more unless you bridge the gap there is in your story.

Please ignore people who don't pay attention to your postings!!! You said that you would send the missing chapter and regardless, the story is great! I can't wait to see how the story keeps unfolding!!!

This story is great and the missing chapter thing is BS!!!

I don't see any problems =]

This gets better as we go along. I'm loving the cat/mouse scenario=LOVE.

This Marcellus character seems like a real ass-hole so far. His character goes out of the way to make the Darien character feel cheap by leaving her money after the 'date.' I'm not seeing any redeeming qualities in his character so far - just another bad guy who wants something good and honest without having to be those things himself.

at least the debt was paid for with the date and she should consider the 5k a tip for the extra she put out and keep it.

I hope she didn't take that money! What an a$$! I can't fathom a man being so ruthless, insensitive, & uncaring. I would've tried to murder him in his sleep!

PLEASE tell me that D is going get a backbone at some point?!?!

Hate that she gave into him

The first time. he leaves her without release, then he pays her for the date and sex. She has some nut cracking to do.

Oh let it would of been me. He'd think I Was the devil instead of him.