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julie_oregonjulie_oregonover 14 years ago
Very hot, can't wait for a sequel

Oh, what a delicious story... and it reminds me of the Oregon Country Fair and their belly dance tent out in the woods. Can't wait for a sequel, as it is definitely heating up.

mountaindreamermountaindreamerover 14 years ago
WOW!

Great story! I hope to read more of your work soon!

sleeplessgurlsleeplessgurlabout 13 years ago
Very nice

You did a lot with the momentum you created in the first story. Very descriptive, well written and very HOT.

cbsummerscbsummersalmost 12 years ago
Wow that was hot!!!

Ive always wondered what skills belly dancers bring to the sack... Now I know!!

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