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cbsummerscbsummersalmost 12 years ago
Wow that was hot!!!

Ive always wondered what skills belly dancers bring to the sack... Now I know!!

sleeplessgurlsleeplessgurlabout 13 years ago
Very nice

You did a lot with the momentum you created in the first story. Very descriptive, well written and very HOT.

mountaindreamermountaindreamerover 14 years ago
WOW!

Great story! I hope to read more of your work soon!

julie_oregonjulie_oregonover 14 years ago
Very hot, can't wait for a sequel

Oh, what a delicious story... and it reminds me of the Oregon Country Fair and their belly dance tent out in the woods. Can't wait for a sequel, as it is definitely heating up.

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Please vote and send feedback on my writing - criticism is the only way to learn. I'm an ordinary guy who has been lucky enough to have an extraordinary sex life over the last 2 decades. My divorce from my first wife started me on a two decade sexual adventure, which is st...