All Comments on 'Dangerous Obsession Ch. 03'

by Reavantwo

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fumundacheezefumundacheezeabout 14 years ago
Now Wait A Minute Reaven

The guy didn't even jack off after his wife passed And Trevor took off with Linda, for a year? You should have made a note of that in the story. You would have thought that the poor guy had enough vivid memories of eating young Trevor's and Doris's cum to have jacked off to for at least a years worth. Oh well, maybe that semen gave him early dementia and clouded his memory. Also Linda deserves more than a hand spanking or a riding crop with which to get her ass whipped. A six foot bull whip with a split end with ball bearings would have bloodied her ass real good and kept her in line, so they could live happily ever after.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I liked the ending

It was a strange story, and I'm glad of the explanation of insanity in her family. Also glad Trevor's going to jail.

The sex scenes were done with mechanical precision but for me they didn't have a lot of passion. However the story line is good and kept me reading all the way through.

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