by Lauries Husband
What a great story line and well written. Very erotic and leaves the reader wanting more. Can't wait for the next chapter
John Norman, when he wrote the "Gor" novel series, recognized that there were men who were naturally dominant; and women who were naturally submissive; he chose to present this knowlege as science fantasy, fiction meant mainly for men.
You, sir, have shown us again that such men and women do indeed exist; but, rather than resorting to the use of science fantasy, you present them in the context of real life, and real situations. It may still be fiction, but it's fiction that we can truly relate to, and more readily imagine ourselves as being part of. Well done.
For me, definitely one of the most erotic and well
written stories that I have read; just wanted to thank
you for sharing your creative imagination with us.
Hope to enjoy reading your tales for years to cum !!