All Comments on 'Dark Desires'

I really loved your well written story, with it's unexpected twist, I'm looking forward to reading more chapters!

and I totally mean that in the original sense...I'm awed. I did not see that coming, and it broke my heart. I so hope there's more.

and I totally mean that in the original sense...I'm awed. I did not see that coming, and it broke my heart. I so hope there's more.

I really loved your story. The love affair was beautiful and I was so happy for them both. Then you threw me for a loop. I didn't see it coming and I usually can sense a change of such magnitude. Not this time though, caught me completly by surprise.

I hope this is not the only chapter in this story. I'm putting you in my favorites!!

Thank you so much to everybody who has read, voted and or commented on my story. In answer to some questions, yes, I am going to write several more chapters. I loved writing it and I love all your comments. I really hope more people get to see this, so tell your friends!

Great story. I totally did'nt see that coming. Now I have to know who this other guy is. Please don't keep us waiting to long. Very good read.

I loved the rollercoaster ride you put me on. I love how everything in the beginning is so normal before you pulled the rug out from underneath poor Jade's feet and sent her crashing to the floor. I never saw the end coming; which is a first for me. Keep them coming.

I love this story, well done. Will you be following it up? I see it's been a while...

really liked it , way to short of a story, Please continue it on farther.like about at least 7 more chapters