All Comments on 'Date Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Nice :) My boyfriends name is Ryan, I might send this to him and tell him to do it to me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Just right

I'm not into rape fantasy but this was very good. There was enough hinting to know it was really Ryan, so I could enjoy it. Nice descriptions and dialog. Well done.

DesireeFoxDesireeFoxalmost 11 years ago
That was fun

just nough of not being sure to have a couple of nice squirts

allenethanmallenethanmalmost 11 years ago
Great First Effort

Surely you have moore stories. Can't wait to read them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story!

Nicely done. Perfect set up and very, very erotic. More stories please. Five stars for this one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Just terrible

SO obvious.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I Don't Understand...

the relatively low score for this story compared to your other work. This is extremely well written with a cool twist at the end. Well done! Five stars.

OvercriticalOvercriticalabout 6 years ago
Predictable, indeed, but...

Sure, it was obvious that the "stranger" was her husband, but it was still well constructed and provocative. I don't think it really is possible for a man to fool his wife into thinking that she's going to be raped by a stranger just because he's wearing a mask and has a gun. I still think it was a fun read. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well-written but I knew at the point the stranger put the gun to her that he was her husband.

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