by mindventure
Nice :) My boyfriends name is Ryan, I might send this to him and tell him to do it to me
I'm not into rape fantasy but this was very good. There was enough hinting to know it was really Ryan, so I could enjoy it. Nice descriptions and dialog. Well done.
just nough of not being sure to have a couple of nice squirts
Surely you have moore stories. Can't wait to read them.
Nicely done. Perfect set up and very, very erotic. More stories please. Five stars for this one.
the relatively low score for this story compared to your other work. This is extremely well written with a cool twist at the end. Well done! Five stars.
Sure, it was obvious that the "stranger" was her husband, but it was still well constructed and provocative. I don't think it really is possible for a man to fool his wife into thinking that she's going to be raped by a stranger just because he's wearing a mask and has a gun. I still think it was a fun read. 5*
Well-written but I knew at the point the stranger put the gun to her that he was her husband.