All Comments on 'Daughter of Treason Ch. 05'

and characters. Just reading this last chapter, I could recall the broad lines of the previous ones, and feel at ease with the development.

It doesn't happen with all stoires I read here, so I gues its a mark of good writing.

Please go on.

I was intrigued with the characters from the beginning and the character development continues to be believable and interesting. Kei is walking a dangerous line and I fear she won't be able to stop until she crosses it. Shino also has a lot of potential drama with his bloodline but he calms her and she needs him.

I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the story! Keep up the good work!

i think i'm starting to hate you a little. your writing such a good story. it's so believable and seemingly real, and i'm hooked. but your making me wait. I hate waiting. please put chapters out more quickly. PRETTY PLEASE

I would like to know more about Shino though. And I would like to see their relationship develop more into a true partnership. Right now he defers to her too much, he's almost too hesitant to assert himself. Great job though, and I would love to read more.