by livingescapist
I would like to know more about Shino though. And I would like to see their relationship develop more into a true partnership. Right now he defers to her too much, he's almost too hesitant to assert himself. Great job though, and I would love to read more.
i think i'm starting to hate you a little. your writing such a good story. it's so believable and seemingly real, and i'm hooked. but your making me wait. I hate waiting. please put chapters out more quickly. PRETTY PLEASE
I was intrigued with the characters from the beginning and the character development continues to be believable and interesting. Kei is walking a dangerous line and I fear she won't be able to stop until she crosses it. Shino also has a lot of potential drama with his bloodline but he calms her and she needs him.
I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the story! Keep up the good work!
and characters. Just reading this last chapter, I could recall the broad lines of the previous ones, and feel at ease with the development.
It doesn't happen with all stoires I read here, so I gues its a mark of good writing.
Please go on.