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Snorts Ch. 14

About time to give it up, isn't it? Your ratings get lower with each passing story. People are trying to tell you something.

Again with the snorting and humming - are you doing it deliberately to piss people off, or are you too pig-ignorant to recognise a massive hint when it slaps you in the face? It's come to the point now where I (and probably nearly everyone else) gleefully scan through these dull essays just to count the snorts and umm-umm's. You probably lost your audience a while ago now, witness the luke-warm, tick-over scores you're getting now, get some imagination, please, or take some advice when it's blared in your face.

You don't know how to write. You're totally talentless....in ALL departments.