All Comments on 'David'

i understand it's your first time writing

as the story progressed, you got better, more descriptive

suggest next time, before you publish, read it and see it as you were a stranger, did it get you off? this time not so much...maybe for you as remembering the fun but not so much fun for a outsider. good effort. i gave you 4 of 5

Really enjoyed your story and the feelings that were exhibited.

I see where you are coming from, and will review more in depth.

A nice believable description of an experience that many young men have had

in their first year away from home. One of the great things about a college education.

I hope this author will be a regular contributor to Literotica in future. He's a good, very talented, writer

liked it alot but its very true and rather sad...

Enjoyed your story, sounds a lot like my story. Think about it all the time.

Sounds a lot like me an my bud in HS. We didn't do anything gay either... We called it playing "Honies" and told ourselves we were practicing for girls...lol Thanks ..brought back a lot of hot memories

Hot story with a sense of a lost part of his sex life.

I remember getting so drunk with both m/f college friends and one of the guys describing a similar path in his life. Brave to bring it up.

Very nice first time story, although it wasn't just a first time...they did it again and again. Not surprising, since it felt SOO good for both boys. Made nme nice and hard and wet, too.