by WittePiet
Thank you for a remarkable story....I think that you have tied up the story exceptionally well with no need to continue with David and Jon.... maybe with Don as another character? or even Luke?
...a sequel or another story, but as yet I don't know whether to continue with the lives of these two boys, which will require a change in narrative style, or to start a story about Tom and Steve, minor characters in this series. I would welcome suggestions.