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PolyLvrPolyLvrover 11 years ago
Pretty good

The only beef I have is the speed with which Marie and Jon entered into an incestuous relationship. That whole situation should have been explored much deeper, similar to the guys' trysts.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 11 years ago
Great series...

...more, I hope!

CajunBillCajunBillover 11 years ago
Dumb Readers

4000+ reads,not shabby, but really this a great story.

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